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some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is apent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree ?

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It is believed that learning has two ways to be achieved, either by learning
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 or practising the skill.Recently,
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 topic has been a heated debate between proponents and opponents , for proponents' perspective is spending time on learning
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 helps the
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 to learn more , while opponents' perspective is practising is a crucial way of learning. In
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 essay , I agree that there is a tremendous amount of time spent on learning
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 because
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 help in learning new
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 and constructing
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's personalities. On one hand ,
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 help students to gain
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.
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 , the more
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 a person gains , the more knowledge he will obtain.
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 , a recent study , which was done in Egypt by a group of scholars , found that two-thirds of students' lives are spent on gaining new
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 and
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 help in gaining better
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.To conclude , new
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 help in better knowledge. On top of that , it is believed that if we do not learn new
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 , we will not learn new subjects.To illustrate , many must go through a plethora of
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 to obtain new knowledge about a certain subject , and
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 leads to learning it. Recently , a paper has been published that found that
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 consume an amount of their early childhood learning
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 that help in constructing their personality. To summarize ,
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 have an insignificant role to gain in
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's personality construction . All in all , taking all the above-mentioned points into consideration.
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 are the building blocks of the process of learning. without its ,help we will not gain any new
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 and we can not build youth.
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