You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navneet Kaur, I stayed in your hotel in room 456 for one week and signed out yesterday evening. Unfortunately, as soon as I reached home, I realized that I left some of my important documents related to my newly opened clothing firm in the drawer that was placed on the left side of the bed.
I was trying to keep them safe but I forgot to collect them
while
living. They are relentlessly vital to me because they contain data regarding all the shareholders of my company along with
that the file also
contains my ownership which is also
vital. I do not want them to be misplaced and do all the detailing again as it would delay the opening of the store.
I would be obliged if you could go and check room 456 before providing its keys to the next visitor. You can leave my file with the receptionist and I can collect that on July 15, 2024, any time during the day. If my documents get lost then
I have to spend another month to prepare all the details once again, it would be a daunting task for my team and I
.
I hope you understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Correct pronoun usage
me
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Ensure to review for minor grammatical errors and typos to improve clarity.
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Try to use slightly more varied vocabulary to enhance the richness of your text.
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Using transitional phrases between paragraphs could enhance the flow of the letter.
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Structuring your paragraphs more distinctly can make your letter even easier to follow.
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Clear and polite tone suitable for a formal letter.
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Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making the letter easy to understand.
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The letter is logically structured with a clear opening, main content, and closing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite