You are organising a conference and you want to request an expert in your field to be the keynote speaker. You have not met this person before. Write a letter to the expert. In your letter explain the purpose of the conference describe what you would like her/him to talk about provide details about the venue, and the date and time of the conference. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Gill, I am writing a letter to request you to become a keynote speaker at the
conference
regarding recent amendments made
in
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under the law of taxes. I am Jaskaran Singh and I am a Chartered Accountant. The
conference
will be
sponsered
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sponsored
by our
institue
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institute
. As you are
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expert in
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of tax law, I would like you to explain the recent changes in taxes in simple words to the other
memebers
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members
of the meeting. I would
also
like you to include the points related
goods
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and services tax. The
conference
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be held at
Taj
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Hotel, Mumbai. The date and timings of the
conference
will be 10th June 2024
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11p.m
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11 p.m
to 1p.m. I would like you to be there 30 minutes prior to the
conference
. Waiting for your prompt reply. Yours Sincerely, Jaskaran Singh
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that all proper nouns are spelled correctly, such as 'institute' and 'sponsored'.
task achievement
Consider expanding on why Mr. Gill's expertise is particularly relevant for the audience to provide a clearer context.
coherence cohesion
Check minor grammatical issues, such as the timing format ('11 p.m. to 1 p.m.') and avoid minor errors like 'under the law of taxes' which could be 'under tax law.'
task achievement
You have explained the purpose of the conference clearly and mentioned specific details about what you expect the speaker to cover, which is excellent.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a professional and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for the context.
logical structure
The structure of the letter is logical, guiding the reader from the introduction, through the main content, and to the conclusion effectively.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • keynote speaker
  • insightful presentation
  • esteemed
  • renowned
  • expertise
  • prestigious
  • honor
  • distinguished
  • audience
  • venue
  • logistics
  • reimbursement
  • accommodation
  • agenda
  • invaluable contribution
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