You and your family are living in rented accomodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter . Introduce yourself . Explain what is wrong with the furniture. . Say what action you would like the landlord to take Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sam, I am Utsav, my family and I have rented an apartment recently through you. I am writing to express some of my concerns regarding the state of furniture in our apartment.

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with, most of the chairs of the dining set are in ruins and it is quite dangerous to sit on these chairs while reading or watching television. As a matter of fact, I almost fell to the ground the other day while watching television, and It would have been a serious medical trauma if I had fallen off the chair.

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to that, the couch in the living room could use some repairs since it lacks proper cushioning. Considering all the above, I would like you to repair all the damaged chairs of the dining set by fixing our appointment with a certified carpenter, operating in our area, at your earliest convenience.

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, the total cost of repairs shall be borne by you as per our agreement. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Utsav Chandel

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

175 words

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