A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

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Dear Rajesh, It's glad to hear about you getting free time for your family after years of hard work. I would surely suggest you plan your

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holiday to an isolated island free from people and full of privacy and spend a good quality of time with your life partner.

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, I recently visited the Maldives

last

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Diwali with my better half which is known as the Island capital of the world and has the most scenic,beautiful views and water in the lap of nature.

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, I stayed in a 5-star property named Taj Exotica Resorts and Villas, in Soneva Fushi Island, part of south Maldives.It has all luxurious Overwater villas and Beachside bungalows with Jacuzzi and private pools.

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,you can enjoy plenty of time swimming in the crystal clear ocean, they

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have a Deck where couples can enjoy the dance.

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, the Multi-cuisine restaurant had varieties of dishes from around the world. Each dish had a different type of expression and the taste of it was mouth-watering.Don't forget to order Thai food, the best that I loved. Hope,

this

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letter thrills and motivate you for going on a vacation. Best wishes, Tushar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

192 words

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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The only reason why people work hard is to earn money and there is no another reason for doing so. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

Some people think that one good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events, while others think that it is not. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology has brought many changes in our lives, especially in the educaion system. One of these is the introduction of online studies. Is this a positive or negative dvelopment? Give readons and examples from your personal opinion.