Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Living in good health is a blessing to have. It is constantly argued whether a government should allow their people to have treatments for free. I raise my hand to the people who support

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notion, and the following paragraphs will analyze two factors that contribute to the affirmation as well as my opinion.

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with, well-being is a right to have it is not a privilege.

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, during the global pandemic, countries like Sri Lanka allowed their citizens to get vaccinated for free, whereas other nations like the USA failed in providing

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facilities to their people. Because of the practice that Sri Lanka continued to have, they were able to control death rates while other nations failed to do so. Most of the poor died because they were not able to pay for the vaccines.

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one of the major benefits of having well-being facilities for no cost.

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, cost-free medical facilities improve the life expectancy of a state. In order to develop habitat, it is essential to a have healthy workforce.

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why United Nations have mentioned life expectancy as a measurement, which describes a country's economic stability.

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, countries like Japan which practice free health care have a higher percentage of life expectancy than the other regional countries failed to have. They always request foreigners to come to fulfil their gaps in the workforce. Over the years, Japan was able to maintain a steady economic development rate thanks to citizens well being.

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another benefit of having free medical services. To sum up my writing, I reiterate every human being must have the privilege of having medical treatments for free. And it is a fundamental right for all human beings, most the least it improves a country's economic stability as well.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

people say that crime reports on TV and newspaper have many disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?