You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Abdulaziz Alruhaimi from Riyadh in Saudi Arabia. I have recently registered as a student at your

college

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major law which is starting in December. I am writing

this

letter to have from you some information. I would like to have information about teachers and professors in

this

college

about their knowledge and experience

also

, let me know about the

college

location is there any nice places to visit

such

as restaurants, malls and café shops.

However

, I would like to have an apartment including two rooms and if possible, I would like to stay close to

college

, so I don’t need to spend a lot of time and money to get there and

this

is very important to me.

In addition

to that, I need some information about the benefits of

student

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a student

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card

for

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example, discounts in gyms or like these things I look forward to hearing from you soon Best Regards

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