You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear Sir/Madam My name is Abdulaziz Alruhaimi from Riyadh in Saudi Arabia. I have recently registered as a student at your
college
in
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to in

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major law which is starting in December. I am writing
this
letter to have from you some information. I would like to have information about teachers and professors in
this
college
about their knowledge and experience
also
, let me know about the
college
location is there any nice places to visit
such
as restaurants, malls and café shops.
However
, I would like to have an apartment including two rooms and if possible, I would like to stay close to
college
, so I don’t need to spend a lot of time and money to get there and
this
is very important to me.
In addition
to that, I need some information about the benefits of
student
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a student

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card
for
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,for

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example, discounts in gyms or like these things I look forward to hearing from you soon Best Regards
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