You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ● ask about the school ● say what kind of accommodation you want ● mention any special requests you have (for example, diet).
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about some information about your English school.
To begin
with,I have recently finished the intermediate level and I am willing to go on my English journey in foreign countries.For
this
reason,I am curious about your private school and its conditions. My friends recommended me your reputable education system several times. I would be glad if you could provide me with specific details of English courses and their duration. In addition
, I wonder if I will receive a lingual certificate at the end
of the courses.
I would be grateful if lived with native teenagers in order to enhance my communication and language skills. Furthermore
, it would be helpful to deal with culture shock.
One thing I would like to request you is that it would be better if there was a gym nearby to workout every day
I look forward to hearing a positive reply from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
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task achievement
To enhance the task achievement, ensure that each request or query is developed fully. For example, after asking about the English courses, you could elaborate by asking about the types of courses available, whether there are specialized courses for advanced learners, or if the school offers any unique features that distinguish it from other schools.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by connecting your ideas more smoothly. Use linking words or phrases such as "Additionally," "Moreover," or "Regarding my accommodation," to create a smoother flow between paragraphs and within them as well.
task achievement
Address the special request more clearly and directly. While mentioning the gym is good, provide a brief explanation of why this is important to you and how it relates to your overall experience at the school to strengthen your task response.
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