Write a letter to your friend about missing the date with him on a day because you have planned. Tell him how you tried to contact him but it did not work out either. In your letter, you should tell: what the reason is how you tried to contact him give an alternative plan to meet him sometime.

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Dear Jacob, I hope you are doing fine. I am very sorry that I missed our date the other day. It was very late at night when I received a call from my mother because my father got into an accident. So, I immediately drove to my hometown to check on them, and fortunately, he is fine now. Anyway, as I was not sure if you were still awake at that moment, I decided that I will contact you when I arrive at the hospital, but when I reached there, I discovered that I didn’t have any cell service. I tried contacting you through my mother's phone but you didn’t answer. I just got back, and I'm wondering if you’re still up for a dinner with me. If so, I am available tomorrow and on Wednesday. If you're not free

then

, please let me know when are you available and I'll try my best to make it. I hope to hear from you soon. All the best, Mary

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

168 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend about missing the date with him on a day because you have planned. Tell him how you tried to contact him but it did not work out either. In your letter, you should tell: what the reason is how you tried to contact him give an alternative plan to meet him sometime.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

the internet will bring about a new freedom of information and so narrow the technology gap between developed and developing countries. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. what problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?