A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

Hello meet, I hope
this
letter finds you well, I received your mail yesterday and I am pleased that you are taking a few days off. I am writing
this
letter to recommend to you the best place to spend your holiday which I visited
last
year. To commence with, in the year 2021 I went to an island name Maderia island, it is in Portugal and the best city to
visit
in Funchal. It was a wonderful experience to
visit
a country with a completely different culture.
Additionally
, I would like to recommend a few places to
visit
and activities to perform to make the best out of your journey, the best sunset you can see
it
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on the cliff, and you can reach there by self-guided trek. Apart from
this
, you can
also
visit
a botanical garden with wonderful flowers and plants that aren't seen in our country.
Moreover
, I had the best aerial view through paragliding and a ropeway, it was an amazing adventure as you can visualise the red roof of every house.
On the other hand
, you can take a ropeway to reach the top of the city and must do a thing over there is to take a toboggan ride. It is
also
known as a basket ride you just have to rest your back for the mind-blowing trip of 15 minutes sliding down in between the city.
This
all will cost less the fifty thousand rupees for 5 days of holiday. I will strongly recommend
this
, as it is must
visit
place for me. If you have any queries regarding
this
you can reach out to me. Yours lovingly,
Vandan
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Vandana
Vanden

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