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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

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Many people believe that genetically modified
crops
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 are the latest biotechnology, which
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 a high potential to increase
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 production. The demand for
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crops
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 should meet the increasing population across the world. In the following ,
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 I will discuss both pros and cons of
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crops
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, the human population is growing faster than expected, whereas
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 are not enough to feed everyone.
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 biotechnology stepping ahead for genetically modified flora to increment
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 management, biodiversity scientists claim that
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crops
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 have nutrients.
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, it's necessary to expand production because in crises few countries are borrowing
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 grains from developing areas.
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crops
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 are
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 beneficial for the economy of the nations to save people from crises in
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 production.
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, wheat is available in Punjab for the whole year which is enough to supply India.
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, some people say eating
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 foods is harmful to health, consuming it can develop genetic disorders in humans. As researchers say these types of foods have allergic reactions after consumption. It is
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 believed that developing genetic
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 can affect the environment as well because it contains many pesticides.
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 few public argues it's unhealthy to consume genetically altered
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, we get leafy vegetables like spinach every year but there is no taste because these are all genetically modified
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. To conclude, on one side demand is high due to the expansion in population vast feed is required on the other side scientist believe that genetically developed flora represents a technology. The potential energy of increasing
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 in a healthy way should be environmentally safe. researchers need to find technology and possible ways of safest growing
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crops
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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