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It is argued that during a natural catastrophe, wealthy land should
support
 other impoverished public. In
this
 essay, I agree with
this
 statement because richer
countries
 have more experience and higher financial stability. The wealthy nations often have more experience than other
countries
 because they used to face many situations and those experiences lead to protection strategies in their country.
For example
, Japan is one of the states that often faced natural disasters
such
 as earthquakes that cause tremendous damage and losses of both construction and human resources for the past centuries,
therefore
, the Japanese are able to understand the loss of other nations the most.
Moreover
, they can provide instruction to the damaged land in order to help them recover faster, and allow them to have more protection in the future.
Countries
 which are suffered from disasters from nature events often need financial
support
 in order to help their population regain their stabilities. Most
countries
 with higher financial positions are willing to give some of their capital in the country’s reserve to help other populations. Recent research concludes that people who have earned more salary are always looking forward to helping people who are in need as we saw large-scale companies often did charitable activities.
On the other hand
, people who earn a limited amount of money are focused on managing their property by themselves. To conclude, it is undeniable and I am fully agreed that poorer
countries
 do need advice and backing from the prosperous states as those experience
countries
 will provide effective practice and
support
, and those nations are
also
 wealthy enough to financially
support
 those injured
countries
.
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