Children as young as eight own a mobil phone nowadays. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Mobile

phones

are the tool of our age, every

one

has

one

these

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shiny flat screens. Their popularity is connected to the fact, that they are key to almost

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everything

evertyhing

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everything

, not only calls. There is nothing which can not be done by or with the mobile

phone

. We pay, order, sleep and dance etc. with it. Despite

of

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the fact that

phones

are

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usually

usally

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usually

made for and by adults, more and more young

children

are to be seen with

such

.

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the wonder if

this

development is positive or not. On the

one

, a

phone

can be

surley

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surely

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

for a

child

as it can reach their parents or other important contacts at any given time

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versa.

This

is especially very

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

for young

children

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around

aournd

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around

8, who just started school and who

are

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out and about at least 5 days a week.

For instance

, if a

child

would get lost on their way to school they could, thanks to their

phone

, call their parents and ask for

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guidance

guidence

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guidance

.

This

also

counts the other

ways

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around, speaking that their parents can call or text their kid in case

ofo

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of

worry.

Phones

for young

children

could

therefore

be seen as a security package.

On the other hand

, is there a huge disadvantage

concernig

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concerning

the combination of young

children

and mobile

phones

.

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As a

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young

child

, with a yet undeveloped personality might be consumed by the addictive

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,

social-networking

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and entertainment options a

phone

optains

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obtains

options

and

this

could lead eventually to mental health issues. As an example could a

child

develop

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as a result

of using the

phone

before going to sleep or develop problems

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concerning

concernig

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concerning

their social

behavior

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as they might reduce their actual social contacts while having more social contact

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through

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trough

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through

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the

phone

.

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To conclude, there are both negatives and

positves

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positives

to allowing

children

to have their very own

mobil

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mobile

phone

. On the

one

they

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partners

partens

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parents

might be less

concered

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concerned

about having the

child

out of the house by

it self

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itself

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but

on the other

hand

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are these

phones

addictive and not got for their mental

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health

heatlth

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health

.

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In my

opinion

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children

are allowed to own mobile

phones

, but only those without data

without Data

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.