new stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. some say that these pictures are more effective than words, what is your opinion?

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in newspapers and TV are used very less but somebody believes that
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are more effective, in my
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a photo could make a great imagination of a condition,
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readers and viewers could make a good image from the report are reading or watching. In ,Fact many reporters or writers use photos for
a new stories
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because a photo
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a general idea about the new story.
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many people are visual and by seeing a condition could understand better than other senses. For ,Instance most
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men are visual and they have better recognition of visual facts.
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it would be nice the new stories come up from these kinds of people
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some
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.
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,
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could explain lots of things just without any words,
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when you want to talk about a beauty of a people or a place you need to use lots of words and explain in a long story, but
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the reader can not make a good imagination as you see,
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any readers would have a different idea from the description.
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by showing a photo of the related subject the reader has a right and effective imagination. Summary, If we use some
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photos in order to describe the situation of the new stories, it would be more effective to impress the readers and audiences.
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it would be nice if the reporters attempt more
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on the TV in newspapers.
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