Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world.Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People hold different views as to whether

information

related to science, technology and business should be shared freely or not. Some believe that

such

knowledge should

shared

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with everyone,

however

, others opine that it is better to keep it confidential. As far as my opinion is concerned,

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information

which is not sensitive should be shared freely,

however

,

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essay is going to discuss both

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public opinions. On one hand, we live in an era where new inventions take place almost every single day and sharing

this

information

is crucial since it helps to keep us updated with the innovations happening around us.

Also

,

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research can be used to develop technologies that can be used by people to ease their lives and for the improvement of

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society.

For example

, the research conducted by the scientists that plasma cells of the recovered Corona-virus patients

helps

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in the healing process of the currently infected individuals

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proved to be pivotal

information

for all the doctors and it

also

improved the recovery rates in the whole world.

Thus

, there is no harm in sharing info which is provided for the well-being of

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mankind.

On the other hand

, sharing too much

information

can

also

be treacherous for a lot of reasons.

Firstly

, in the case of business, some vital features which are related to the designs and functions of a new product are valuable assets and if all the details relating to it will be disclosed to the public in advance, competitors could easily penetrate the distinctive components resulting in

decline

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of company's profits.

Secondly

, research related to nuclear technology is very sensitive and confidential. On

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top of that, if

this

information

falls into the hands of a naive person or a terrorist, it will jeopardize the lives of the humans and

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the career

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career

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of

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scientists.

Hence

, giving all the details of a particular invention can be a menace

for

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the universe. To conclude, I support both

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standpoints as it is extremely important for the world to share scientific and technological knowledge, but it is equally important to safeguard the

information

that is

delicate to companies and the country.