Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many manufactured food and drink

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contain high levels of

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nowadays which could cause many

health

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problems. Some

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consider that sugary

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should be made more expensive to encourage

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to consume less

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. Consuming too much

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is harmful to our body's

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, whereas I do not think making sugary

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more expensive is

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proper to deal with

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problem.

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of all, the circumstances right now are based on

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's choices. In the past, before the revolution of the sugary industry,

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was considered a luxury which was only affordable for the riches. The higher

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is linked to higher production,

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, it becomes cheaper and cheaper.

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means that

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could gain energy easily from the development of the sugary industry which significantly reduces the possibility of

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suffering from hunger and lack of energy.

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,

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is not a totally bad phenomenon as all these kinds of

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products

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could provide us with an important resource for nutrition gaining.

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, it is true that too much

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could harm our

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.

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, it is not the best way to raise their prices as it could harm many poor families. In my point of view, there are two choices.

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, reduce the proportion of

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inside those

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to reach the goal of less

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consumption

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. Another one is to develop and search for better substitutions like zero calory

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, which could provide sweet flavour but no

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of calories.

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, the market for zero

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is getting larger and larger and it has even become a fashion in society. The success of ZERO COCA is a vivid example of

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. In conclusion, I do admit the

consumption

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of

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should be limited and reduced. While I don't think it is good to make sugary

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to be more expensive. There are other ways to reach

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goal and

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be better for our physical

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.