some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, shuld always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinin.

These days thanks to the presence of the Justice Department all the criminals who are captured by the police

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the kinds of their crimes.

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, some members of the public argue that the same correction measures should be considered for guilty people

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I argue the punishment must be various for offenders.

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with, the notion of some citizens believing the fine should be fixed for all lawbreakers leads to more injustice in societies.

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, severe violence will increase because the punishment for each crime

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not be different.

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, if someone kills an inhabitant, he will

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for a year which

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equal to one who just breaks the leg of another one. If I were a criminal of the second crime, I would absolutely protest

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condition.

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a result,

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way only worsens the circumstance.

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to the mentioned items, some other citizens are guessing that the fine must suit the severity of their faults which had been executed.

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, The kinds of

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should be decided by jurors after considering all factors after hearing the claims of victims and defendants and probing into all proofs.

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, if someone breaks into a home

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off a heist will be imprisoned for a year

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a

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must be killed.

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, the rate of crime definitely will decrease. In conclusion, for making a safer society and

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residents ,particularly youngsters

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the members of the jury must reckon all things for doing punishment. I suppose those similar penalties for all criminals because of the reasons I explained in detail.