Some people believe that the nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Thanks to the development of
internet
and communication technologies, we can enjoy a wide variety of products through internet shopping. Correct article usage
the internet
Likewise
, children in the countryside can access to
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apply
an enormous online courses
provided by Correct the article-noun agreement
enormous online courses
an enormous online course
top ranking
universities worldwide. Considering these points, now we are apparently enjoying more and more Add a hyphen
top-ranking
choices
, and this
makes us happier than ever. However
, I strongly doubt that those choices
enrich the quality of our lives in terms of environment and education. Even worse, it might cause more harms
than benefits.
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harm
First
of all, we are exposed of
a number of commercial advertisements through SNS Change preposition
to
such
as Instagram, Twitter and Facebook and urged to buy unnecessary stuffs
, which will eventually create a larger waste. Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
For instance
, once the
famous Instagrammer or celebrity posts a photo of a particular product, many followers will be encouraged to purchase one, even though they already have similar products. Correct article usage
a
This
will inevitably cause mass consumption and damage our environment by producing a large amount of waste.
Secondly
, young adults tend to be vulnerable to peer pressure and decide their
life path to meet Change preposition
on their
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the desire
desire
of their parents, teachers, and classmates. Fix the agreement mistake
desires
For example
, there are some TV shows which feature female students in a prestigious university
. Fix the agreement mistake
universities
However
, no matter how it gets popular, the unbalanced percentage of male and female students in the university has not improved well. It revealed that family and friends are more important than the number of options,
when a teenager make a critical Remove the comma
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decision
about their lives.
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decisions
a
plenty of Remove the article
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choices
are not necessarily makes
our lives convenient and satisfied, Correct subject-verb agreement
make
moreover
, too many options sometimes provoke issues. Online shopping with a great variety of products can result in tons of garbage which will harm our environment. In addition
, juveniles are inclined to be swayed by others’ opinions and fail to take an advantage of possible choices
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