You work in an international company. Write a letter to the manager for allowing extra hours off during work time to attend family celebration. In your letter, you should Explain why you want to take a day off Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

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Dear Mr Brown, I am writing

this

letter to ask for your permission to take off from 1:00 to 5:00 pm tomorrow so that I can attend the celebration at my home. Let me explain that I have to go to the engagement of my sister which is going to be held on tomorrow.

Thus

, I have to be there so that I can help my parents if they need any thing. I want to attend the whole celebration as it is the most important day of my sister's life. She

also

want my presence in whole function. As I know that we have an urgent meeting with foreign clients on the same day of engagement. I have made an arrangement for that already so that our company's work would not suffer. In order to perfect presentation, I had made an audio-visual presentation which is going to play at the time of the meeting. In

this

way, I had managed the work in advance. The rest of things would be looked by Mr Steven. Looking forward for your positive response. Your's Sincerely, Ammy Sandhu

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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should the governments make decisions about peoples lifestyle , or should people make their own decisions?What is your Opinion?

Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent you agree or disagree?