TASK-1 Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community, but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter – Express your feelings about missing the sports event – Tell them about your plans for next year – Explain how this sports event is useful.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my discomfort as we,
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United India, will not be hosting our annual sporting
event
called "The CWG" because of financial stress.
To begin
with, our company has incurred a few heavy losses in
this
fiscal
year
. I believe, two of our major contracts with one of our biggest clients went off the hill and it still poses a lot of complexities, especially financial, in hosting
this
year
's
event
. In the wake of
this
, I am really disturbed to
this
day as
this
event
adds a plethora of value addition to our community, particularly teenagers.
Furthermore
, we are certain that we will bounce back
next
year
with great enthusiasm as before. I believe a new committee has already been set up, ensuring that our budget for the
next
year
not be affected regardless of our financial position. As you already know,
this
event
is a great medium for college-going students to seek scholarships from the leading universities of our country if they are exceptionally talented at sports. For the
next
year
, we are trying to bring in some of the prestigious international universities as well. Warm regards, Utsav Chandel
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