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5. Chitra - Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

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Nowadays, in many ,states
a
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the
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 number of
people
 who want to become
teachers
 are getting
decrease
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decreasing
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, especially in high schools. The main reason is that young students are transforming
to
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into
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 adolescents and
lecturers
 can not put up with their inconvenient behaviours. To deal with
this
 problem could be paid
extra
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an extra
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 salary to
teachers
.
To begin
 with,
attitudes
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the attitudes
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 of young
people
 have bothered the
lecturers
 who are working in secondary schools. Nobody would dispute the fact that the most unbearable term
of
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for
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 young
people
 for
teachers
 is the adolescent era when kids have been affected by diverse hormones associated with their process of getting older.
For example
, generally, young
people
 have a tendency to
do
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not obey the formal or informal rules due to hormones which are cited above and they have admitted the
lecturer
 as a
representer
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 of authority that should be opposed. To solve
this
 issue might be given to high school
lecturers
 more money than other
teachers
. It seems to that giving
exra
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extra
 payment to these
people
 could be motivated them being
lecturer
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a lecturer
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. By
this
 means,
this
 job can gain its charming
to
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apply
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back and
lecturers
 might prefer to benefit from
this
 opportunity.
For instance
, a young teacher candidate
maybebe
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maybe
maybe be
 consider the money issue and he could
be choose
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choose
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 to be a
lecturer
 in secondary school. To conclude, the problem is that in a number of countries many
people
 do not want to be a
lecturer
 in secondary schools caused by the inappropriate behaviours of adolescents can be solved with extra payment to these
lecturers
.
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