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Communication through text messageing and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling.Do you agree or disagree.

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In our modern world,due to the huge advancement of
technology
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,a sea-changing has occurred in the field of
communication
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.Because of our lifestyle,
people
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 have a preference for instant ways of
communication
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.A camp of society believes that it can lead to diminishing
grammar
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rules
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 and spelling.I partly agree with
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 opinion. Primarily, thanks to
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,
people
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 have access to the internet everywhere they are so they keep in touch with their friends and families via social networking sites
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 as Instagram and Facebook.On
such
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 platforms,
people
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 use abbreviations of words and actually they do not pay attention to the correct spelling of the words.
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,it can affect
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 and spelling in the long run.
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,vocal
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 is of necessity in
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's life.It is used in
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's daily life.
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,individuals may need to write some letters to their bosses or the students have to write an academic report and all of them should be error-free.
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,correct spelling and using
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rules
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 correctly have been taught the children,at
the
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 early age,as soon as they start primary school.They learn how to write and memorise word spelling under the observation of pedagogical experts. In spite of the fact that
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 provides smart keyboards for mobiles and computers that are capable of autocorrecting sentences grammatically and help them to write correctly,it causes
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 to become careless about the
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rules
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 of their language.
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 it has made a negative influence on
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's writing skills. To sum up,
technology
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 has provided some short and instant forms of
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 for
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 ,but it has caused
people
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 to become negligent about
grammar
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rules
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 and spelling which would lead to abolishing them as the days go by.
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