It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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contention due to the potential for better growth and advancement.
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Risk taking
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goal
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takers create their own path and never settle for less in professional as well as in personal lives. For instances Use synonyms
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are
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they need to struggle and quit their comfortable Use synonyms
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whether professionally or personally. Use synonyms
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risk-taking
risk taking
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risk-taking
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...