For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?
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people
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an improvement
the improvement
communication
and learning made very easy.
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and foremost, improvement in communication
is one of the enormous reasons people
believe the addition of data
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a data
processor
as a fourth skill will be of help. Fix the agreement mistake
processors
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is because,
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people
are moving round
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around
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this
has helped greatly such
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to face
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whatever
what ever
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For example
, it was recently reported that with the invention of computers, letter writing has decreased to 5% as more people
need not to
stress themselves to write and post but can just call and the message will be delivered.
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worth considering. A key factor to this
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face
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For instance
, during the Covid pandemic, studies continued Correct your spelling
throughout
through out
without interruption with the help of computers.
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communication
and studying without difficulty, I can say without any reservations that data processor
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