Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requriement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

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Some people think that

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from

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is not completely recycled . So they propose that

government

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can bring a chance by imposing strict laws on recycling which can increase the rate of recycling among the public . I strongly agree with

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nation to a great extent .I believe that the

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should initiate environmental laws so that people could educate about them and start implementing

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in their lives. In the forthcoming paragraphs , I will explain my views. Over the years , we have been taught about how to

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pulled off by simply implementing 3R's which stand for Reduce , reuse and Recycle.

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,the 3R's are a very effective method they are pretty hard to implement.

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, the

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should implement rules and regulations that solely focus on helping people to reduce

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and reuse products.

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, Campaigns should be organized by the

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on the importance of recycling

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and trach everyone to practice the recycling process at home.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

166 words

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