Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Ans. Many individuals opine that it is better to adjust
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bad
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a bad
the bad
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situation
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, like an unsatisfied
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job
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job
or lack of
money
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. Others believe that it is admirable to try and
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for the best . In my view., I believe that
people
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should try to
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their problems.
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explain both
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sides and provide reasons as well as,
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illogical conclusion. To commence with , in
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modern era everyone wants to show their luxurious lifestyle
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others, but due to unsatisfied
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jobs
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and shortage of
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money
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nobody wants to deal with the
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.
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, they adopted their bad conditions rather than doing other
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or
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. Some
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people
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the people
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who
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are stressed and struggling because
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some
reasons
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they
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do not want to
work
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again.
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, they will comfortable with
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a bad
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situation
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.
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, according to
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research by
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75% of natives are mentally depressed and they do not do any kind of
work
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or make
money
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in their life. On the other side, every problem
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silution
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solution
solutions
. If inhabitants
doing
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work
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hard so they definitely achieve their goals. They have to improve their problems by doing
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hard.
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to
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,
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should have to take challenges in their life ,
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moreover
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they were able to
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compete
different competitions. As well as, if
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have lots of
money
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so they can easily deal with bad situations.
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, as per a survey conducted by 'The Times of India, 85%
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people
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of people
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were satisfied with their
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and surviving a wealthy lifestyle by learning new skills from old mistakes. To sum up, I believe that both sides have their own benefit.
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,
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accept their bad
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but
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they have to
do
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work
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hard and learn new skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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