Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Ans. Many individuals opine that it is better to adjust
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bad
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situation
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, like an unsatisfied
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job
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job
or lack of
money
. Others believe that it is admirable to try and
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for the best . In my view., I believe that
people
should try to
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their problems.
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sides and provide reasons as well as,
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illogical conclusion. To commence with , in
this
modern era everyone wants to show their luxurious lifestyle
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others, but due to unsatisfied
job
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and shortage of
money
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nobody wants to deal with the
situation
.
However
, they adopted their bad conditions rather than doing other
work
or
job
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. Some
of
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people
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the people
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who
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are stressed and struggling because
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some
reasons
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they
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do not want to
work
again.
As a result
, they will comfortable with
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situation
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.
For example
, according to
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research by
WHO
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75% of natives are mentally depressed and they do not do any kind of
work
or make
money
in their life. On the other side, every problem
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silution
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solution
solutions
. If inhabitants
doing
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work
hard so they definitely achieve their goals. They have to improve their problems by doing
work
hard.
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to
this
,
people
should have to take challenges in their life ,
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they were able to
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compete
different competitions. As well as, if
people
have lots of
money
so they can easily deal with bad situations.
For instance
, as per a survey conducted by 'The Times of India, 85%
people
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were satisfied with their
work
and surviving a wealthy lifestyle by learning new skills from old mistakes. To sum up, I believe that both sides have their own benefit.
Although
,
people
accept their bad
situation
but
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they have to
do
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work
hard and learn new skills.
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