You recently completed a course and youu borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful was the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

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Dear Mrs Brown, I am writing

this

letter to thank you for giving me

this

book

which had been fully beneficial for my university entrance exam. The

book

was highly recommended to me by you seeing that it is considered a comprehensive source of tests for college entrance quizzes.

First

, as

this

examination has been entirely competitive reading

this

book

had been so useful and made me familiar with the question types of each subject that I confess if I had not read and reviewed

this

, the exam would have been so difficult for me.

Moreover

, it boosted my confidence because I had answered the questions of the previous years in various chapters of

this

leaflet correctly.

lastly

, I am going to apologize to you since I am not able to return the

book

on time to you seeing that my departure date to my country was exactly the day after my test and I did not find free time to get it back to you.

As a result

, I will return it to you with two weeks delay. yours faithfully, Saeed Sarai.

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