These days, many people are moving from rural areas to city centers. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
These days, most citizens chose to move from
village
to Fix the agreement mistake
villages
city
Use synonyms
centers
. Some Change the spelling
centres
people
think Use synonyms
this
lead to separate families because men are the ones who start Linking Words
this
process, while others say Linking Words
this
is a positive step to take because Linking Words
people
have better job opportunities. I believe moving to a Use synonyms
city
is preferable than stay in rural areas to get a better education and employment.
On one hand, believing that family is Use synonyms
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going
goign
to Correct your spelling
going
be dissolve
by moving abroad is not a Change the verb form
be dissolved
sustantable
reason. Many Correct your spelling
sustainable
people
who stay Use synonyms
at
their village still have the same Change preposition
in
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possibility
posibility
to get Correct your spelling
possibility
divorce
. It Add an article
a divorce
is argue
that Change the verb form
is argued
family
should Fix the agreement mistake
families
be keep
together if they want to succeed. Change the verb form
be kept
However
, Linking Words
this
sometimes does not Linking Words
work
only by staying close to each other. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Mexico Linking Words
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city
, during the day many women do not stay at home with their Change the capitalization
City
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children
chikdren
because they need to go to Correct your spelling
children
work
to Use synonyms
sustent
their Correct your spelling
sustain
family
. Fix the agreement mistake
families
As a result
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
abscense
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absence
create
a big gap Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
among
the couple. Change preposition
between
However
, I believe if there is true love, it does not Linking Words
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matter
mattter
the Correct your spelling
matter
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circumstance
circumstances
cirscunstance
to fight for the family.
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circumstances
On the other hand
, many Linking Words
people
who live in rural areas dream to move to a Use synonyms
city
because most of them have better jobs and life. It Use synonyms
is well know
that living in a Change the verb form
is well known
city
demands more Use synonyms
work
and education, so Use synonyms
people
can find a decent salary. On top of Use synonyms
this
, society become Linking Words
accostum
to Correct your spelling
accustom
work
and studied at the same time to Use synonyms
imcreases
their chances to reach their goals. To explain my point, in the United States Correct your spelling
increase
increases
many
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much
immigrant
need to Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants
work
and attend school to get a degree, and they can demand Use synonyms
higher
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a higher
salary
. With Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
this
, citizens are able to send money to their village and support their Linking Words
family
. I believe Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
is a positive decision to obtain a Linking Words
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better
bette
life and education.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
better
although
leaving the rural area is a hard process, it is preferable to take the risk and evolve because there are more changes in a Linking Words
city
to get a decent salary than in a rural area. I have no doubt that Use synonyms
this
is preferable than stay and Linking Words
expect
some miracles are going to occur and resolve the situation.Wrong verb form
expecting
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite