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In some countries young people are encourage finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

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Before embarking on college many young people are advised to start university
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 level education is very expensive and lots of students decide to work for 12 months and save up money before
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 suddenly and sharply to their studies.
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 accommodation and focus on their studies, rather than struggle financially or have to get a part-time job on top of their academic work. The times recently reported that the average student at a UK university requires over $12000 per annum just to survive and
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most of them are
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 out because they cannot afford to stay. On another hand, Despite these advantages, many students often get used to working or travelling and don’t want to return to a life of study after a year off.
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university altogether and go straight into a job
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, a recent survey by the British government found that 26% of students who take a gap year never enter tertiary education. In conclusion, taking a break from studies can be a disadvantage if it allows people to gather up saving, they should
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 be careful that it does not lead to disillusionment with education altogether.
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