It is a prevalent issue that the proliferation of social networking sites
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taking place in
worldwide.
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I believe its disadvantages
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.
,in the sector of telecommunication social
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been a blessing for all of us who
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to communicate on
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and professional level.As in
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world ,
people
are more prone to communicate through social hubs as an
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other modes of
communication
,which is indeed a great feature of these
apps
,as in a cheaper way ,within seconds
people
can be communicated.These
apps
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calling features ,because of which
people
hardly need to do direct
communication
.
For example
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their kith-and -kins.
Hence
,they are facilitating
people
from direct
communication
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social
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websites.
Nevertheless
, these
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tools are jeopardizing our mental ability to increase connectivity ,due to which we are more
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.To illustrate,direct contact helps an individual to know
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better way than that of artificial intelligence in
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everything is showy and mechanized .The reason why today psychological
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people
are highly exposed
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these
communication
mediums which is rather making them selfish and isolated.Rather
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socially active,it is snatching away their soft skills which would help them to shine
further
.
Such
as ,being lonely for a
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time is equal to consuming 15
per day ,according to the U.S.A government ,which is really alarming .
Hence
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should be given more priority.
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apps
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our privacy .To interpret,whenever we call through websites ,we may be trapped by a
third
party who could sell our valuable information to hackers.Due to
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,we can be socially
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as
this
could leak our valuable information.A recent example could be ,
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renowned politician of Bangladesh
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socially boycotted as someone revealed his private
with a renowned heroine ,which was embarrassing for him.
Thus
prominent
apps
can tarnish our reputation by breaking confidentiality.
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for facial contact ,
it is increasing social distance and
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our private life.
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advantages.