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The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in the society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #face #interaction #people #society
It is a prevalent issue that the proliferation of social networking sites
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 taking place in
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numerous
countires
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countries
 worldwide.
Although
 it has benefits,
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 I believe its disadvantages
outweighs
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advantages
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.
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 ,in the sector of telecommunication social
apps
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have
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 been a blessing for all of us who
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 to communicate on
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 and professional level.As in
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fast paced
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 world ,
people
 are more prone to communicate through social hubs as an
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of
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 other modes of
communication
,which is indeed a great feature of these
apps
 ,as in a cheaper way ,within seconds
people
 can be communicated.These
apps
 have audiovisual
contents
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 calling features ,because of which
people
 hardly need to do direct
communication
.
For example
,through skype and emo,indifferent of anywhere ,anyone can contact
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their kith-and -kins.
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 ,they are facilitating
people
 from direct
communication
 as they are
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 and sometimes costlier than that
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social
communicating
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 websites.
Nevertheless
, these
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 tools are jeopardizing our mental ability to increase connectivity ,due to which we are more
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.To illustrate,direct contact helps an individual to know
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someone
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some one
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someone
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 in a far
more
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better way than that of artificial intelligence in
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 everything is showy and mechanized .The reason why today psychological
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diseases
disesases
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diseases
 are occurring
as
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people
 are highly exposed
towards
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to
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 these
communication
 mediums which is rather making them selfish and isolated.Rather
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 socially active,it is snatching away their soft skills which would help them to shine
further
.
Such
 as ,being lonely for a
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 time is equal to consuming 15
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cigarettes
cigaretts
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cigarettes
 per day ,according to the U.S.A government ,which is really alarming .
Hence
 ,
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the face-to-face
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connection
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 should be given more priority. What is more alarming ,
that
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 these connection
apps
 are compromising
with
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our privacy .To interpret,whenever we call through websites ,we may be trapped by a
third
 party who could sell our valuable information to hackers.Due to
which
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,we can be socially
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 as
this
 could leak our valuable information.A recent example could be ,
a
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renowned politician of Bangladesh
was
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 socially boycotted as someone revealed his private
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conversation
converstaion
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conversation
 with a renowned heroine ,which was embarrassing for him.
Thus
 prominent
apps
 can tarnish our reputation by breaking confidentiality. To
coclude
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conclude
,in terms of convenience ,social sites are
best
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alternate
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 for facial contact ,
however
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 it is increasing social distance and
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interfering
on
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with
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 our private life.
That is
 why as a whole disadvantages are more prominent
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 advantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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