Some people say that it is possilble to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, all over
world
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societies have different kinds of customs, traditions and regions in their lives.
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, cultural effects can be shown
their
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clothes
choising
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so their preferred have demonstrated their lifestyle. I
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strongly
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strongly
believe that in
this
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arguments
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and I will
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and elaborate in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, some feel that cultural habits can be ensured
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differences in
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many societies.
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, clothes can reflect people's
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traditions
via numerous dresses and
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their combines can
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those who lining area.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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