These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,abundant incidents of violence are shown on

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TV.

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will have a bad impact on the mind of the

children

.

This

will

also

affect their behaviour in many ways.It is often argued that it is more disadvantageous to the youngsters . I will agree with

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statement and discuss more in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,there are a plethora of drawbacks of

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first

and foremost reason is that

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contemporary

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,era there are lot

problems

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but

from

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sometimes cases of murder has been increased.Its main reason is gang wars.Every morning on every channel all news is full of violence particular

to

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that their

children

are

also

watching the same news on the television.

In addition

,it has a bad impact on the learner's mind and

also

impacts their behaviour.To cite an example,if

children

will listen to or watch

this

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of news they will become like them and can not

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progress in life. Moving

further

,

internet

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help a lot to increase the

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proportion

porportion

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proportion

of violence ,In the

cutting edge

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era mainly movies are

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gangsters . Earlier movies are not of

this

type. Most directors made these types of movies to attract the youth and gain more profit but they do not know they spoiling the

youngsters

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future.

For instance

,they got knowledge of how to become a gangster and they think there are myriad

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benefits behind it.In

this

regard,they become

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criminals and do not follow the law ,doing a lot of antisocial activities. To sum up,for the reason mentioned increasing disturb the pupil state of mind and

although

they attract to ill legal activities.I

opinie

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opinion

that parents keep a watch on their

children

, and guide them in a proper way.