Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Computers

are quite common in modern society and we rely on

computers

not only

in

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work but

also

in our daily life. Most families have more than one computer in their house and opinions are divided on whether

children

should use

computers

every day.

Although

there are some benefits for

children

to

use

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a computer, I think the

the

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parents should limit the frequency of

children

’s computer

using

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.

Firstly

, there

are

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too much information on the internet or in the games which are not appropriate for

children

including violent and sexual scenarios. These factors could be quite implicit and be hard for adults to screen

them

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out

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at the

first

glance, let alone for

children

. As we all know

that

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,

children

is

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significantly influenced by what their parents and fellows do and tend to mimic what they have learned.

As a result

, they may misbehave in

their

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real life and cause disaster for their family.

Furthermore

, abuse

in

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computers

may impair

children

’s eyesight. Compared to reality, games and

internet

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seem so

colorful

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,

children

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may indulge in

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computers

for hours and hours. The direct result is that their eyes will be hurt and that damage in

eye

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is hard to be reverted. They have to wear glasses for the rest of their life and

that is

truly inconvenient. From my perspective, I suffer from the inconvenience of wearing glasses every day and I know I can’t get rid of

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. I regret that I did not protect my eyes in my youth. In conclusion, I honestly think that

children

should avoid using

computers

every day. For the

first

reason, it may hurt the

children

as there

are

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huge

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amount of inappropriate information for

children

. Meanwhile, it may hurt their eyes and the effects will

last

for a lifelong time.