Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are quite common in modern society and we rely on

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not only

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work but

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in our daily life. Most families have more than one computer in their house and opinions are divided on whether

children

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should use

computers

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every day.

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there are some benefits for

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to

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a computer, I think the

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parents should limit the frequency of

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’s computer

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.

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, there

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too much information on the internet or in the games which are not appropriate for

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including violent and sexual scenarios. These factors could be quite implicit and be hard for adults to screen

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glance, let alone for

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. As we all know

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,

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significantly influenced by what their parents and fellows do and tend to mimic what they have learned.

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, they may misbehave in

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real life and cause disaster for their family.

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, abuse

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computers

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may impair

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’s eyesight. Compared to reality, games and

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seem so

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,

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may indulge in

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for hours and hours. The direct result is that their eyes will be hurt and that damage in

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is hard to be reverted. They have to wear glasses for the rest of their life and

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truly inconvenient. From my perspective, I suffer from the inconvenience of wearing glasses every day and I know I can’t get rid of

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. I regret that I did not protect my eyes in my youth. In conclusion, I honestly think that

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should avoid using

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every day. For the

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reason, it may hurt the

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as there

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huge

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amount of inappropriate information for

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. Meanwhile, it may hurt their eyes and the effects will

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for a lifelong time.