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In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#role #teachers #information #sources #students #education
ONE WIDELY HOLD OPINION IS THAT THE MAIN PURPOSE OF
TEACHERS
’ EXISTENCE IS TO OFFER
INFORMATION
.
STUDENTS
 IN CURRENT SOCIETY CAN HAVE ACCESS TO AMOUNTS OF
INFORMATION
, AS A CONSEQUENCE
TEACHERS
 ARE NOT SIGNIFICANT AS BEFORE. I TOTALLY DISAGREE WITH
THIS
 STATEMENT. THE INTERNET PROVIDES LEARNERS WITH ABUNDANT
INFORMATION
 AND MAKES THE PROCESS OF OBTAINING INFO MORE EFFICIENT, CONVENIENT AND INTERESTING, AND IN
THIS
 SENSE
TEACHERS
 CAN BE SEEN AS UNNEEDED. TO AN EXTENT, WHEN A STUDENT WANTS TO KNOW THE HISTORY OF FRENCH, SHE CAN EASILY FIND VARIOUS SOURCES, WHICH RANGE FROM VIVID ILLUSTRATIONS TO PROFOUND ARTICLES.
NEVERTHELESS
, ONLY WITH
TEACHERS
 CAN SELECT THE MOST SUITABLE material, NO MATTER WHERE THE
INFORMATION
 COMES FROM AND EMPLOY DIFFERENT STRATEGIES SUITED TO THE PARTICULAR GROUP OF LEARNERS. APART FROM THE MOST OBVIOUS FUNCTION OF
TEACHERS
 DISCUSSED ABOVE, THEY PLAY A KEY ROLE IN MORAL EDUCATION AND SOCIAL
SKILLS
 LEARNING. THE COMPETITION IN ADULT LIFE IS SO FIERCE THAT ONLY EQUIPPING WITH ACADEMIC KNOWLEDGE IS NOT ADEQUATE. UNDER THE GUIDANCE OF
TEACHERS
,
STUDENTS
 CAN UNDERSTAND HOW TO BEHAVE PROPERLY AND BECOME PRODUCTIVE MEMBERS OF SOCIETY.
MOREOVER
, THE SAME IS TRUE FOR SOCIAL
SKILLS
. IF A STUDENT IS RICH IN KNOWLEDGE BUT WEAK IN SOCIAL
SKILLS
, THERE IS LITTLE POSSIBILITY FOR HIM TO BECOME A WELL-ADJUSTED ADULT. TO SUM UP,
ALTHOUGH
 THE ADVENT OF MODERN TECHNOLOGY BRINGS ABOUT AMPLE
INFORMATION
 FOR
STUDENTS
,
STUDENTS
 REQUIRE MORE DIRECTION IN TERMS OF STANDARD OF UPRIGHT CONDUCT AND SOCIAL
SKILLS
, SO THE ROLE OF TEACHER IS LESS LIKELY TO BE REPLACED.
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