You are doing a three-months' course at a training institute. You have recently been offered a full-time job at a company and you can not continue the course. Write a letter to the course instructor. In the letter: •explain why you cannot continue the course •describe the job you have been offered •and ask if they have an evening course that you can continue

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Gihan Edirisinghe Kodikara , and my student registration number is 1254932. I am writing to request a change to my course from full-time to part-time. I started

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programme on June 15, 2025, and I'm in johne smith's morning class. Over the past month, I have been attending regularly, as I know hands-on experience is rudimentary

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for developing my practical skills.

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, I recently offered

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job at the ABC company. The working hours are from 8:00am to 4:00pm.

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, my workplace was located relatively close to your institute, just about 40 40-minute walk or a 10-minute drive.

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my new job working schedule, I kindly request to transfer my programme from a morning to an evening class, if possible.

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very helpful to contribute

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attendees without any problems and continue to improve my practical skills. Please let me know if there is any availability to change

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course and other possible part-time options. Thank you for your time and consideration. Best regards, Gihan Kodikara

gihankodikara93

Jul 21, 2025

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Task Achievement

Make sure to include a clear reason for wanting to switch to evening classes in the first paragraph.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to make connections between your work and the class in a smoother way.

Coherence and Cohesion

Check for simple grammar and spelling errors, like 'johne' should be 'John'.

Task Achievement

You provided your student registration number, which is helpful for identification.

Task Achievement

The letter has a polite tone, which is very nice.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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