Some people think news has no connection to peoples live so it is a waste of time to read news in newspaper and watch news programme in television .To what extend do you agree or disagree

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,
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all over the world, we are hearing bad
news
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this day
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. some
believe
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believe
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that information which cast
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from
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news
no related to peoples
live
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lives
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and destroyed our valuable
time
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course
following
this
news
. In my view, it is important to manage our worth
time
and ignore
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irrelevant
news
.
Firstly
, spending
time
on bad
news
can be a
couse
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cause
to
interupt
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interrupt
our
time
work.
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one
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hand, we waste our
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moment
as following information no connection to us
instead
of following positive and
importance
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important
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book
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books
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which can enhance our knowledge and ability in work.
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,
last
year
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was keen to follow all the
news
related to
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Iran
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in
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the internet but
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had to been studied my lesson so
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unfortunately
unfortunally
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unfortunately
i
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couldn't pass my exam.in sum, we shouldn't allow
to waste
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wasting
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our
time
on
a bad
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bad news
a piece of bad news
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news
.
Secondly
, bad
news
can impact
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our
soul
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.
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Unfortunately
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Unfortunately
, all over the earth we can observe
disaster
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disasters
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happening. We have been passed illness years and
then
war
happend
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happened
happens
happen
between
Ukruine
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Ukraine
and Russa which both
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the
negetive
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negative
fluence on our mind. it can
be provide
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numeros
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numerous
aspect.
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example
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it impacted
on
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increasing the number of
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during these years.So we have to avoid
follow
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the yellow
news
.
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contrary
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the contrary
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, some people believe we have to know about events
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surrounded
srounded
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around
us
as
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to
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prevent bad happening in future In conclusion, the bad
news
which has no connection to us can waste our
time
and turn us
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into
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the
deppression
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depression
individual. I want to restate on opinion and take
you
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advice to abandon bad
news
.
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