In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think te advantages of driverless vechicles outweigh the disadvantages?
The development in the field of technology like artificial intelligence and machine learning has brought in many advancements in
automobile
industry. Add an article
the automobile
As a result
, one such
invention is autonomous vehicles
which was a distant dream a few decades ago has
become a reality now . Correct word choice
and has
However
there are pros and cons of
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to
this
discovery, I strongly believe that the advantages of this
outweigh its disadvantages. To begin
with, automatic vehicles
like trucks,cars and flights fundamentally depend on machine learning and other advanced technologies. As a result
, machines can sometimes malfunction which may lead to disastrous results on road
. To illustrate, Tesla is a path breaker in producing autonomous Correct article usage
the road
vehicles
, during their initial rollout phase, there were numerous accidents reported , sometimes the death of passengers. In addition
to this
, if all these vehicles
become driverless thousands of drivers those
who make their living in Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
profession can lose jobs when technology takes over, this
can leave
a detrimental effect on the community. Verb problem
have
On the other hand
, in this
era of modernization ,time is an important asset. Driverless vehicles
can save many from tiring driving experiences, especailly
in metros Correct your spelling
especially
such
as Mumbai and Banglore where the traffic congestion is dreadful which leaves a negative impact both physically and mentally as a result
more accidents inclined
to happen. Add a missing verb
are inclined
Moreover
with this
technologies, Correct determiner usage
these
human related
errors and work Add a hyphen
human-related
hours related
limits can be minimized. Add a hyphen
hours-related
For example
, there are government regulations that only allow a driver to drive not
more than 8 hrs, Correct your spelling
no
this
rule has caused Add an article
a delay
the delay
delay
in logistics ,Fix the agreement mistake
delays
supply
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and supply
chain
and affects the economy. With the Fix the agreement mistake
chains
driveless
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driverless
vehicles
these issues can be addressed. Add a comma
vehicles,
Furthermore
, we can save fuel cost
as the crude oil prices are extremely high and Fix the agreement mistake
costs
also
there will be major
improvement in air quality . Add an article
a major
To conclude
, although
there are few
downsides like high insurance Correct article usage
a few
cost
,technical issues,privacy concerns,unemployment and maintenance Fix the agreement mistake
costs
cost
. I firmly believe that Fix the agreement mistake
costs
benefits
of Correct article usage
the benefits
these technology
outweigh the drawbacks.Change the determiner
this technology
these technologies
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
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