Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible, while others believe that children should not start primary school until they are six or seven-years-old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education
plays a crucial role in the development of Use synonyms
children
in many ways. Some people believe that Use synonyms
children
ought to attend Use synonyms
school
as much as earlier, whereas opponents support that Use synonyms
school
life should be started at around six or seven Use synonyms
years
old for the sake of the Use synonyms
children
. Even though either of them Use synonyms
have
advantages and disadvantages, the former seems to me more reasonable. The reasons will elucidate in Change the verb form
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On the one hand, nursery Linking Words
school
curriculums are developed based on an exact approach which cares about Use synonyms
children
's biological ages and capabilities. Clearly, Use synonyms
children
have more opportunities to improve their manual dexterities, communication, and soft skills through playing and making activities in Use synonyms
such
schools. Montessori would be a good example of Linking Words
this
, according to Linking Words
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children
take Use synonyms
responsibilities
for their daily needs like cleaning, and cooking which Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
are
highly significant for holistic development. Change the verb form
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Besides
, in the modern Linking Words
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children
do not have a sibling,and a social environment Use synonyms
that is
provided in the Linking Words
school
may eliminate Use synonyms
this
loneliness as well. Linking Words
Therefore
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the
more Correct article usage
apply
years
in Use synonyms
school
bring more benefits in the long run.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
first
six Linking Words
years
of life are deemed Use synonyms
as
significant for establishing firm family bonds. Change preposition
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to say, a sense of trust is built over Linking Words
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period between Linking Words
parents
and Use synonyms
children
. If Use synonyms
children
spend less time with their Use synonyms
parents
it probably leads to a detrimental effect on Use synonyms
the
emotional development of Change the word
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children
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In addition
to Linking Words
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, Linking Words
children
who attend Use synonyms
school
at earlier ages compared to peers are likely to discourage in the future because of their long Use synonyms
education
. Use synonyms
However
, those Linking Words
parents
who have a busier work routine do not allocate adequate time to their Use synonyms
children
and Use synonyms
this
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also
causes the same problem. Linking Words
Hence
, If Linking Words
parents
do not enrol their Use synonyms
children
at Use synonyms
school
, they should provide for them a parental Use synonyms
education
at home.
In conclusion, there is a dilemma whether Use synonyms
children
should go to Use synonyms
school
till six Use synonyms
years
old or not. Use synonyms
Although
both factors have their own benefits and drawbacks, I believe that receiving a proper Linking Words
education
as much as earlier presents more advantages for Use synonyms
children
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