You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. •Say where you think you left the papers •Explain why they are so important •Tell the manager what you want him /her to do

Dear Manager, I hope you are well. I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to you to inform you about my mistake I made. Unfortunately, I forgot my important documents during the

last

Linking Words

meeting at your hotel.

Moreover

Linking Words

, as far as I remember, it might be on the table in room 28, or I dropped it somewhere between room 89 and the car parking area. I can understand that it is not easy to find a small paper in a large area. I truly appreciate any effort you can make. These documents are very important to me. As I am new to India and not well-renowned in the organisation, these are not just pages for me but

also

Linking Words

proof of my hard work and rights in the company.

Lastly

Linking Words

, I kindly request that if you happen to find them, please contact me at 87857767. Thank you very much for considering my request. Warm regards, Preet

manpreetk221101

Jul 11, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement

Try to give more clear details about what papers you lost.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has one main idea and sticks to it.

task achievement

You might want to say a little more in the closing about how much you appreciate their help.

positive

Your letter has a nice greeting and closing.

positive

You expressed the importance of the documents clearly.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. what whould you think the causes, and what measures could be taken to solve them
In contemporary society, unhealthy lifestyles have become increasingly prominent. Given this, some argue that this conundrum causes a decrease in cardiovascular fitness. This trend can be primarily attributed to bad eating habits, however, proper awareness might alleviate this problem. Thus, this essay aims to explore the causes and solutions to this phenomenon.
6
band
According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and ’70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happens? How was tourism different in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Tourism has clearly altered over the years. It is said that during the 1960s and 70s, tourists used to know nothing upon returning from their global visits. Conversely, these days tourists are becoming more aware and open towards the visited regions to the extent that they almost refuse to return back to their homelands. This essay will thoroughly explain the reasons behind this phenomenon, highlighting the main differences over the years.
7
band
International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the enviroment. Do the disadvantages of International tourism outweight the advantages?
Whilst it is believed that globalization has provided dozens of new tourism-related opportunities for many countries around the world, implications such as mass immigration and pollution are causing a salient concern for the locals. However, I think the positive payback of tourism will shadow its drawbacks in total.
7
band
As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?
Some individuals argue that businesses should focus not only on generating profit but also on fulfilling their social responsibilities. Personally, I agree that while making money is a business's primary objective, contributing to society is equally important.
6.5
band
In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweight disadvantages?
The future of transport is the talk of the town.All vehicles will be driverless,in the future.Only travellers will be present in transport.

in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. what whould you think the causes, and what measures could be taken to solve them

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the enviroment. Do the disadvantages of International tourism outweight the advantages?

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweight disadvantages?