A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Tariq Hope you are doing well. I am very
exciting
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excited

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to hear that you will
moving
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move
be moving

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in
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to

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Riyadh and congratulation on your new career. To be honest I would like to live in my
neighborhood
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neighbourhood

The spelling of neighborhood is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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that
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apply

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because we have
a
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apply

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vast activities and nice places there
such
as
,
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apply

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events that
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are organizer

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organizer
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organised

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from
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by

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entertainment
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the entertainment

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of authority and there are
a
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apply

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wonderful restaurants and cafe shops.
However
, Riyadh is the best and easier country in transport you can do your travelling in several ways instance, download delivery applications.
Also
, in
future
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,future

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our metro will be finished.
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to that, we can
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hang out

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hangout
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hang out

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together and I will introduce you to my friends they are friendly and funny. They usually meet on Thursday at
place
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a place

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called Esteraha and they always have a nice discussion in every
things
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thing

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in life. I believe that you will
be
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enjoy
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yourself in

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in
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apply

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Riyadh. I look forward to meeting you. Best Wishes
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