A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Tariq Hope you are doing well. I am very

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to hear that you will

moving

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Riyadh and congratulation on your new career. To be honest I would like to live in my

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that

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because we have

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vast activities and nice places there

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events that

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organizer

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from

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entertainment

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of authority and there are

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wonderful restaurants and cafe shops.

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, Riyadh is the best and easier country in transport you can do your travelling in several ways instance, download delivery applications.

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our metro will be finished.

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together and I will introduce you to my friends they are friendly and funny. They usually meet on Thursday at

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called Esteraha and they always have a nice discussion in every

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in life. I believe that you will

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enjoy

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Riyadh. I look forward to meeting you. Best Wishes

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6 paragraphs

154 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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