A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there
It appears that the form of the participle exciting is not correct in this context. Consider changing it.
The verb moving after the modal verb will does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider changing the verb form.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The spelling of neighborhood is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.
The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun activities in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
It appears that the comma after such as is unnecessary. Consider removing it.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
The word organizer doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase entertainment seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun restaurants in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase in future. Consider adding a comma.
The word hangout doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word hangout doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase place seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The singular quantifier every is followed by the plural noun things. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.
The verb be appears to be unnecessary here.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
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