In the future, nobody will by printed newspapers or blooks because tehy will be able to read everything tehy want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement ?

Our
society
is significantly influenced by the impact of digitalism. It became a fixed part
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our daily dealings as it is not only helpful in personal life but
also
very useful in manners of education and government. It is as well very beneficial in sectors that are involved with mass communication, entertainment and
infromation
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information
spread just as
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newspapers
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news papers
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and
books
. These printed pages are
rumored
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to be
repalced
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replaced
by digital
alternatives
without demanding additional costs. I am
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opponent of
this
idea and
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essay I will examine my opinion with examples. One major point why I believe that at some point in the future
books
and newspapers will be replaced by digital
alternatives
is
,
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because digital
alternatives
are more convenient and less expensive to produce. While producing a book involves plenty of steps from sourcing the paper and the ink
over printing
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it
and
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to binding it by hand, a digital book just
need
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one simple step: the upload into a digital portal.
Hence
, all the money which is nowadays invested in manufacturing
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/
books
could
for instance
be invested in important governmental
improvement-sectors
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such
as
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green energy transportation or education. Another reason
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approve is the fact, that most
books
are sooner or later ending up in the wastebin anyways. Either because they are too old or because they have lost their value
for
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society
. Digital
books
and magazines prevent the huge amount of paper waste which is created by
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and magazines made
form
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paper. Digital
books
and Newspapers are not only more convenient for
society
but
also
for our planet.
However
, some
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people
peopel
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people
argue, that
books
and
newspaper
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too
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traditional and rooted within
society
as there have a chance to
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disappear
dissapear
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disappear
completely. To sum up, I am of the opinion, that newspapers and
books
will be
repalced
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replaced
by digital
alternatives
due that they are easier to produce and better for our planet.
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