In the future, nobody will by printed newspapers or blooks because tehy will be able to read everything tehy want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement ?

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Our

society

is significantly influenced by the impact of digitalism. It became a fixed part

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our daily dealings as it is not only helpful in personal life but

also

very useful in manners of education and government. It is as well very beneficial in sectors that are involved with mass communication, entertainment and

infromation

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information

spread just as

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newspapers

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news papers

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and

books

. These printed pages are

rumored

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to be

repalced

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replaced

by digital

alternatives

without demanding additional costs. I am

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opponent of

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idea and

this

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essay I will examine my opinion with examples. One major point why I believe that at some point in the future

books

and newspapers will be replaced by digital

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because digital

alternatives

are more convenient and less expensive to produce. While producing a book involves plenty of steps from sourcing the paper and the ink

over printing

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and

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to binding it by hand, a digital book just

need

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one simple step: the upload into a digital portal.

Hence

, all the money which is nowadays invested in manufacturing

newspaper

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newspapers

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books

could

for instance

be invested in important governmental

improvement-sectors

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such

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green energy transportation or education. Another reason

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approve is the fact, that most

books

are sooner or later ending up in the wastebin anyways. Either because they are too old or because they have lost their value

for

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society

. Digital

books

and magazines prevent the huge amount of paper waste which is created by

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and magazines made

form

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from

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paper. Digital

books

and Newspapers are not only more convenient for

society

but

also

for our planet.

However

, some

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people

peopel

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people

argue, that

books

and

newspaper

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too

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traditional and rooted within

society

as there have a chance to

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disappear

dissapear

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disappear

completely. To sum up, I am of the opinion, that newspapers and

books

will be

repalced

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replaced

by digital

alternatives

due that they are easier to produce and better for our planet.

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