Your neighbor has been making a lot of noise recently. This has been causing you problems, and you want to ask them to stop. Write a letter to your neighbor in your letter: Ask for an explanation for the noise Explain the problem this has cause to you Say what will happen if the problem is not solved.

Dear Mr Parekh, I am writing
this
letter regarding the inconvenience caused by the noise coming from your house for the past few days. To commence with, for a week there is continuous noise coming from your house. As I am not sure what makes
this
occur if there is an emergency for which you cannot stop
this
, I would like to ask for an explanation for it.
Additionally
, when I took a newborn to the hospital as he was not feeling well, doctors suggested it is caused due to the incompletion of his sleep schedule.
Moreover
, it
also
causes trouble for my grandparents. Apart from it, I would
also
like to request you to stop the noise ice during the afternoon so that it can give relief to a baby as well as, a sign of relief to family members, still continues I have to raise complaints to the secretary of the society. Thank you in anticipation for your consideration and hope to hear from you soon Yours faithfully, VandanPatel.
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