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Scientist say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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The
language
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 barrier is a major problem faced by
people
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 around the
world
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 when they try to get out of the box. Researches advocate that in the coming
years
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 humanity will have a common
language
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 to communicate. I consider
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 an advantageous development, and my reasoning is analysed in the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly
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, there are numerous benefits followed by accepting a single
language
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 medium for the whole community.
Initially
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, the exchange of ideas might not be a big deal,
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 individuals from varying cultural backgrounds and groups could flawlessly share useful information with the whole
world
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. Primarily in the case of pandemics and catastrophes, a plethora of plausible measures might be derived from ancestors and grandfathers of different groups, which help to mitigate the detrimental effect that followed.
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, even though Indian Tamilians knew the remedies to cure the plague in ancient days, it took almost a millennia to transfer the accurate details of the method to the outside
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 to decline the number of deaths. If the communication was better, the hazardous disease could have been eradicated easily.
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, one
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 for the whole
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 not only helps
people
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 to go through different cultures but
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 youngsters and enthusiasts
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explore the
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 and human qualities without
language
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 discrimination. To make it more clear it opens a new door for explorers to fly overseas without a
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 thought and acquire the lifestyles and cultures adopted by different groups on mother earth.
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, a prime issue encountered by international students in a foreign country might be
the
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negligence based on
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,
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 that problem might not pop up. Another point to be considered is that
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people
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 from underdeveloped countries like Africa and Nigeria can easily find better employment opportunities without the
language
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 test and complexities of
language
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. To conclude, the same communication medium for all will be a great initiative that
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path
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 to significant changes and potential benefits for
people
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 as well as the kingdom.
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