Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Because of the development gap between
countries
in the world, developing Use synonyms
countries
often receive financial aid from the rich to solve poverty. Use synonyms
However
, the problem still remains so there are opinions that support that the wealthy nations should change their Linking Words
way
of supporting the other Use synonyms
countries
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besides
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money
stuff. Personally, I partly agree with Use synonyms
this
belief since rather than Linking Words
money
, technologies and education should be added for a comprehensive solution.
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To begin
with, the major reason is how the given Linking Words
money
is used. Obviously, no matter how large the amount of Use synonyms
money
is, financial aids are unable to show any efficiency as a whole if it is not used the right Use synonyms
way
. In spite of finances, the rich, which have more high-educated experts and cutting-edge devices, can send them to poorer Use synonyms
countries
to improve people's lives there. Use synonyms
For example
, voluntary professionals can help natives level up their knowledge, it is necessary for the far future, not only at the moment. With modernized technology, production will be extended, contributing to solving poverty.
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Otherwise
, since there are many factors Linking Words
such
as small market, war, and monoculture,... poor Linking Words
countries
often have no ability to create profits themselves, Use synonyms
that is
the reason why they have to borrow and receive financial support from worldwide organizations. Without Linking Words
money
, it is not only impossible to develop the Use synonyms
countries
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also
tough to enhance their own people's lives. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
although
giving other types of help is important and necessary, funds could not be cut off. The best Linking Words
way
is to think about the most efficient Use synonyms
way
to spend the funds.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
giving funds to poor Linking Words
countries
is required for the poverty-solving purpose, educational and technological help should be added to deal with undevelopment.Use synonyms
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