You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Luis, I hope you are doing well. I am Shweta Bhat, a member of the CEBC Students' Club. I received an email regarding an event which our club is organising for the students where different

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cuisines would be served. I am writing

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letter to request to have a Butter Chicken dish from India as one of the

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in our event.

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,the reason behind

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is that the dish is popular in India and growing up I always liked Butter Chicken. The chicken is cooked in tomato paste and cream which gives it a creamy texture.

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, it would not be spicy for the students as sugar is one of the main ingredients. Since no one from our club had ever tasted real authentic Indian

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to be included in our event. In

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Indian cuisine. I would appreciate it if you would agree with my proposal of including a dish from my home country. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Yours faithfully, Shweta Bhat.

bhat.shweta17Sun Jan 05 2025

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Provide a brief explanation of what makes Butter Chicken distinct from other dishes, which would emphasize its cultural significance.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a particular aspect of your offer, such as personal connection, description, and inclusion reasoning, for a clearer structure.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and enthusiastic, suitable for the purpose of making a suggestion to an event organizer.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Contribution
Cuisine
Traditional
Ingredients
Preparation
Cultural significance
Celebrate
Diversity
Culinary traditions
National dish
Occasion
Unique attributes
Preparation method
Gourmet
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Flavorful
Recipe
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