People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing. Should such sports be banned?
Today's
sports
have become part and parcel of everyone's life and it is considered a leisure activity. Dangerous sports
like rock climbing and sky diving have gamed its significance among individuals.
To commence with, dangerous sports
require optimum safety
to avoid casualties while obtaining it, which must be taken care of by safety
standards like wearing safety
gear, health checkups,and appropriate training with serval examination to ensure it. Hence
, individuals can enjoy themselves without having a phobia of losing their lives despite it being deadly sports
and risk takers also
went to feel alive and thrilled, which can be delivered by such
sports
only. For instance
, Dubai is a very popular sky diving and they have established a particular centre for providing knowledge about the safety
measures participants must pass the examination to experience sky diving. This
approach is successfully followed by experts and there is no evidence of any accidents till now.
To conclude, people want change in their lives and they participate in extreme sports
to escape themselves from negative perceptions and emotions like phobia, which is only possible through the experience of dangerous sports
so that is
should not be banned.Submitted by ronak.patel999899 on
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