It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to the regime should pay all attention to provide own people's vital needs

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of striving for another

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because it is not possible to always help all folks around the globe.

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notion seems to be true as a positive key to helping all continents. To commence with, several issues that should require all concentration of the authority in every country rather than on other continent's

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and foremost, underdeveloped countries have almost insufficient funds for catering to their massives. If their focus on other needs, their people face several consequences of

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practice.

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, Burundi is the

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on the list of other developed nations that always struggling to provide proper facilities

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as education,health and tourism.

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,

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type of underprivileged is unable to help others.

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, taxpayers pay taxes to the regime for the development of their country. So they have the right to access all services and improvements as a priority

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to assist another province.,

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if the high authorities give preference to their

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, it will not bring benefits to the economy of a homeland but

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make countries capable to help other groups. To cite an example, If the youngsters get a better education, health services and proper support,

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, they become more efficient citizens which eventually contributes to the prosperity of the

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every sovereign should give significance to its population. in conclusion, governments should pay all attention to providing their

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proper needs as develops their country and it is right for all citizen to pay taxes to receive vital facilities and services to become

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good citizen and be

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to other

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