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People should follow the local customs and traditions when they come to live in a new country.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #customs #traditions #country
It is true that nowadays
the
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technology has
been
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made
traveling
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 more easier.
As a
result
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 many
people
 prefer to live in a
country
 which can provide them
a
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better lifestyle .Some
people
 hold the opinion that when a foreigner chooses to live in a new
country
 ,he should follow the customs and traditions of the
country
 where he resides .As far as I am concerned, I agree that by following a nation's customs and traditions
people
 can acquire a better life
in
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there.
First
 of all, the traditional aspects of a
country
has
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 the potential to unite the
people
. Traditional festivals Bring
people
 together and make a strong bond between them.Eventually, each and every person start to care for
nation
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 and
people
. To
eximplify
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simplify
,celebrations like Diwali and Holi make
people
 in India gather together and share their happiness with each other,despite
of
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thinking that they live in a diverse
country
.
Therefore
, if a foreigner respects and celebrates
this festivals
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these festivals
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would get a huge acceptance among the Indians.
Secondly
,when a new person
get
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 to know a
country
's traditional customs and laws,it
make
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the
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life
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quiet
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 easier there. If an individual
unaware
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about
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 the residing
country
's regulations, he may tend to make mistakes quite often. As a consequence, they might end up in prison or paying
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a penalty
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penalty
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.
For instance
, many
people
 from India have got lifetime imprisonment in Gulf countries as they act differently without knowing
this
country
's regulations. Unfortunately, most of them were innocent
people
. To conclude, I totally agree with the fact that a new person must be
understandable
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 about the
country
 he lives in .
Therefore
 he can be welcomed by
the
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society and can have a comfortable life
in
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there
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