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Nowadays, many natural places are damaged by people who keep throwing their garbage. what are the causes ? How can this be solved

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In
this
 contemporary era, few natural spots are damaged by individuals who keep throwing their mistreatment material here and there.There are two main causes behind
this
 trouble , the development of big manufacturing industries and another one is unawareness among people related to
this
 complication.
This
 essay will not only highlight the reasons behind it but gave some remedies to resolve the difficulty.
To begin
 with,
first
 and foremost cause a lot of international or local manufacturing companies are developing at a faster rate.A large quantity of maltreatment is produced by big factories and all waste material is not deposed properly,which creates a lot of problems in society.
For instance
, a recent study has shown that 75% of harm is generated by manufacturing industries.
As a result
, it gave birth to a number of diseases
such
 as dengue fever, malaria and so on.In ,addition to it
this
 dilemma
also
 causes chronic diseases like cancer.A lot of people are unaware of
this
 headache and that's
also
 one of the main reasons behind
this
 problem .To cite an example ,
firstly
 people take any step against these types of problems and later they regret it.
Moreover
, every issue has many solutions so
this
 obstacle can
also
 solve by taking corrective action ,
firstly
 government should make some laws regard to
this
 question and
then
 ensure that rules are to be followed in a proper manner.
Secondly
, the government can organise some campuses to aware the public and highlight the bad impact of garbage. In conclusion,
although
 it is not a duty of the state only as well as it is the responsibility of the public to not throw corrupt material in natural places.And authorities should take serious steps against these types of problems.

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