Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think that it could be better to our environment and economic if people only ate local produced food. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
As we all know that
food
supplying services from abroad have a very high demand all over the world. Some people
, chiefs would like to try cuisines such
as Indian, Chinese, Korean
cuisines. While Correct word choice
and Korean
on the other hand
, some are there who believe Its
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such
a money waste when exporting food
ingredients from other countries. As It’s greatly affected to country
’s economic level. So those people
came up with a phrase that Local growing foods are much healthier and profitable
to them, to their Correct quantifier usage
more profitable
country
, and to the
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with, there are some advantages can
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Firstly
, we can consider about
most of the Change preposition
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people
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interests
its
cooking and trying out new dishes and different cuisines. Replace the word
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People
often do it as a hobby too. By letting the people
experience with
those delicious, mouthwatering foods, they tend to know about uniqueness and quality prevailed in different cultures worldwide.
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Secondly
, when it’s come to local
job market, as Add an article
the local
people
normally adventurous and curious, exporting food
from abroad would be able to provide job opportunities as well as It will uplift the food
variant culture too. Mostly, this
could lead to attract
many tourists at the same time.
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attracting
In contrast
, we can see disadvantages beside
the previous benefits which I mentioned before. For bringing up Replace the word
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food
from huge miles away from the country
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a
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food
mileage. The more and more the travel of time increases, easily the food
could get spoil and to prevent that, farmers use excessive
amount of chemicals on them. Add an article
an excessive
Consequently
, many people
have to suffer from various non communicable
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sometimes
might get more serious. Correct pronoun usage
that sometimes
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other
point is that Local government have to spend Change the wording
another
huge
amount of money for exporting purposes like Add an article
a huge
food
. If the exporting improves , the country
drag in to
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the
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a
corruption
state. So Replace the word
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country
needs to be more aware Add an article
the country
about
the income and apart from that locals would not Change the preposition
of
be motivate
to cultivate the typical foods Change the verb form
be motivated
in
their farm.
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that
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people
should be able to have own
freedom to experience new things in their lives And without Correct pronoun usage
their own
depend
on other countries the government should Change the verb form
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strengthened
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strengthen
up
both export and import in a Change preposition
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balanced
balance
way. As there’s is no saying that Locals should only try Correct your spelling
balanced
local
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