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Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think that it could be better to our environment and economic if people only ate local produced food. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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As we all know that
food
 supplying services from abroad have a very high demand all over the world. Some
people
, chiefs would like to try cuisines
such
 as Indian, Chinese,
Korean
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 cuisines. While
on the other hand
, some are there who believe
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such
 a money waste when exporting
food
 ingredients from other countries. As It’s greatly affected to
country
’s economic level. So those
people
 came up with a phrase that Local growing foods are much healthier and
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 to them, to their
country
, and to
the
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nature.
However
,
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 discuss
about
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the pros and cons
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 those two points of
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.
To begin
 with, there are some advantages
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Firstly
, we can consider
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most of the
people
’s
interest
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 nowadays,
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 cooking and trying out new dishes and different cuisines.
People
 often do it as a hobby too. By letting the
people
 experience
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those delicious, mouthwatering foods, they tend to know about uniqueness and quality prevailed in different cultures worldwide.
Secondly
, when it’s come to
local
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 job market, as
people
 normally adventurous and curious, exporting
food
 from abroad would be able to provide job opportunities as well as It will uplift the
food
 variant culture too. Mostly,
this
 could lead to
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 many tourists at the same time.
In contrast
, we can see disadvantages
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 the previous benefits which I mentioned before. For bringing up
food
 from huge miles away from the
country
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scientifically we called it
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food
 mileage. The more and more the travel of time increases, easily the
food
 could get spoil and to prevent that, farmers use
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 amount of chemicals on them.
Consequently
, many
people
 have to suffer from various
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 diseases
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 might get more serious.
Then
other
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 point is that Local government have to spend
huge
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 amount of money for exporting purposes like
food
. If the exporting improves , the
country
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corruption
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 state. So
country
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 needs to be more aware
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 the income and apart from that locals would not
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 to cultivate the typical foods
in
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 their farm. To conclude
that
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,
people
 should be able to have
own
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their own
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 freedom to experience new things in their lives And without
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 on other countries the government should
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up
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both export and import in a
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balance
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 way. As there’s is no saying that Locals should only try
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 produced
food
.
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